According to the first marking period, I
did a lot of works for all of my lessons, and I think I learned and achieved a
lot. I said I wanted to get a good score and some good feedbacks from my
classmate and my teacher at the very beginning of this marking period. Till
now, I’m still work so hard. At least it was a lot better than what I did for
last year.
For the first thing I did, I tried to write
details in my works, especially for when I wrote book reviews or wrote for
characters. For example when I wrote a book review for Persepolis, I found many
details from the book to support my ideas. Also, I found many quotes to state
my points. I wasn’t a good writer before because I found that thinking of
details are too boring when I was writing. As I was a fast writing and reading
person, I just want to say what I thought in a quick and easy way instead of
using a long time to express my emotion and express my characters’ emotion.
Then, I changed in this marking period, I started to think of more details to
make my essays a full and colorful one.
On the other hand, I wanted to improve my
grammar also in the start of this marking period. In the meantime, I did a lot.
For each essay I wrote, I used a long time to revise it and I usually asked my
friends to help me fix it. It’s because people were always good at finding
others mistakes instead of finding their selves. Even though there were still
several grammar mistakes with articles, tenses and sentence fragments, it’s already
getting better. Also, I would keep working on it. I believe that I would do
even better later.
The reason why I got these developments
should be that I was hard-working enough and I was focus on my projects so
patiently and carefully. I had never doubted that I could achieve my goals and
I was keeping working on my grammar and details for the formal essays and
stories. I had never forgot my goals that I wanted to achieve in every homework
or participation in this class. Then, I improved the quality of my essays and
the ratios of my essays were higher and higher. Lastly, I think I achieve what
I wanted for this marking period, a nice grade and some good feedbacks.
To conclude, I want to give myself some
other goals. As a reader, I want to improve my vocabulary to understand the
books better and not using too many time for looking up words. Also, I wish I
would participate more during the class period. No matter the answer was right
or wrong, I must think about more. Last but not least, I think I should paying
more attention when others speaking, then I would notice more good ideas from
other people. As a result, I would do better for class in the next marking
period.
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